Anony-moose Posted June 21, 2017 Share Posted June 21, 2017 I posted a poem I made some time ago, "A Child at Heart" and made a few more since then. Enjoy my bad writing! (Criticism always appreciated) -- Like Cotton Candy Crushing, smotheringCome near I can't- the very idea sounds suffocatingTry Why would I?You might feel complete How can a sea of cotton candy- pink Soft, but sticky, and much too sweet, complete? How would I even think?It is human I am human- that's not something I hideIt's a lovely feeling To sweet tooths love is appealing To others, it belongs off to the side -- This next one isn't really about romance/aromanticism or relationships in general, not necessarily? But it can be interpreted as such I guess. The ocean is a friend The ocean is a friend. Strong and constantly changing Its power leaves us shaking and shivering, Yet when we dive It is most refreshing. The lake is similar to the ocean. It is cool and alive Yet more calm and safe. No one longs for the lake Only for the sea What could it be, That creates such divide? The adventurer, like the sailor, Ventures to see where such unknown depths hide But when they return to land, It is to a lake beyond a bank of sand The answer is simple, The ocean may be an adventurous friend But the lake is a home -- This next one was inspired by A Streetcar Named Desire, as well as by my own experiences. Don't be Stanley Stella! Stella there you are! There goes my shining star! Let's play and chat And watch that show with the hat Stanley come, sit with us Why would you find this tedious? Stella! Stella! Come and see Oh what a stunning existence is she Oh, not today? Well that's alright, maybe later, what do you say? Stella! Stella! How've you been? Are you tossing my letters in the bin? Oh I'm only joking You wouldn't do such a thing! Blanche, oh Blanche, don't you see? I've been spending some time with Stanley I hope to meet you soon! Oh, wait, it just hit me like a harpoon That's when Stanley and I have a date I hope 10 days won't be too late Stella! Stella! Of course not! Gives me time to try new dresses I bought We'll have a girls' night out! With exhiliration we will shout Stella! Stella! There you are! I missed you, my little star Oh and Stanley, you are here? I thought I had made it clear That you were not to come Blanche, dear little Blanche, how naïve are you? To think a woman would not bring her husband too. Link to post Share on other sites
iwpseudonym Posted June 21, 2017 Share Posted June 21, 2017 Honey, I'm an editor for our school's literary magazine, and let me tell you, I would weep tears of joy if this was the kind of submission we got. xx Link to post Share on other sites
kaseythefairy Posted June 21, 2017 Share Posted June 21, 2017 @Anony-moose I hope you have other spaces that you share these in the world, internet or otherwise. If you have a blog where you post your work, I would love to know about it Keep writing! Link to post Share on other sites
Anony-moose Posted June 27, 2017 Author Share Posted June 27, 2017 @iwpseudonym Thanks!! Although that's kind of sad (not really, it just means people submitting have more space for improvement haha), I'm glad to know my writing skills aren't 100% trash XD @kaseythefairy Unfortunately I don't, since I rarely write (been doing it more often though!) Link to post Share on other sites
Anony-moose Posted June 30, 2017 Author Share Posted June 30, 2017 Added a new one! Link to post Share on other sites
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